WHITE LINE NIGHTMARE
Maggie and Mourgan are moving in together! It's an eight hour drive from rural Illinois to Pittsburgh, and these two lovers are meeting up in person for the first time. Will they be normal about being locked in a hatchback all day?
11k words
(content warnings: suicide mention, vomit, description of really awkward sex)
---
the second project from KINDNESS WONDERLAND.
made for TOXIC YURI VN JAM 2.
KINDNESS WONDERLAND is:
Harmful Park - Director, Writer, Programmer, UI, Photographer, Music and SFX
Rist_5 - Writer, Crayon Art, Passionate Graphic Design
littlebeats- Writer, Crayon Art, Profile Pictures
coolfonts.online - Artist, Character Design, Photographer
Game&Burger - Editor, Art Consultant, Misery Inflictor
---
thank you for playing.
Download
Comments
Log in with itch.io to leave a comment.
excellent, compelling, incredibly upsetting, full of passion. what a wonderful read.
really liked this. great ending
this game is killing me. I cannot stop thinking about it. It's making me think about things I usually keep buried deep. I'm such a sucker for better online than in person, and I'm such a sucker for two people who shouldn't be together trying to make it work anyways. This game reminds me of myself in the worst ways. The ending is killing me too. I'm putting it on my flash drive where I store all my favourite games.
first
super cozy and enjoy the contrast of a green and pastoral ambiance with chronically-online characters. playing this with a fan blowing on my face felt like the intended experience.
This sucked me in and had its hooks in me throughout, nice work all.
Art style was fitting and vibey. Music and "music" was also fitting. The framing images on the screen gave each scene a unique feel and added to the narrative quite a bit. I thought the plot beats and setting worked really well to make each beat further unravel the characters' relationship. The claustrophobia was present through my entire reading too lol. There were a number of times where the text I was reading proceeded without me clicking it when I didn't have auto turned on - unsure if that is my doing. Big ups - I think the intention of this vn was achieved very well.
thank you so much!!!! ^_^
first
first :D
frist
first
first
first.
first.
first.
god f***ing damn it